From 957e2ed783ad4a90fe209b11dd37870a234fd69e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: sotech117 <michael_foiani@brown.edu>
Date: Wed, 17 Sep 2025 12:46:20 -0400
Subject: update wording

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 resume.html | 27 ++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

(limited to 'resume.html')

diff --git a/resume.html b/resume.html
index e257ce7..f2369a7 100644
--- a/resume.html
+++ b/resume.html
@@ -209,17 +209,18 @@
           </div>
           <ul>
             <li>
-              Deployed locally-hosted, secure, private, and cost-effective IT
-              solutions on Proxmox Servers for small businesses and non-profits
-              that replace monthly subscriptions and modernize infrastructure.
+              Deployed secure, private, and cost-effective IT solutions on
+              locally-hosted Proxmox servers for small businesses and
+              non-profits that replace monthly subscriptions and improve
+              performance.
             </li>
             <li>
-              Migrate infrastructure like Apache and Ruby on Rails with Nginx
+              Migrate dated API infrastructure (e.g. Apache and Rails) to Nginx
               and Next.JS to ensure future compatibility.
             </li>
             <li>
-              Made landing sites for advertisement purposes using either
-              HTML/CSS or Vite+React/TailwindCSS.
+              Create sites using either HTML/CSS or Vite+React/TailwindCSS for
+              advertisement and marketing purposes.
             </li>
           </ul>
         </section>
@@ -283,7 +284,7 @@
             <li>
               Ported light video processing from the Node.js backend to the
               client using WebAssembly FFMPEG libraries, reducing heavy CPU
-              usage and network load on the Azure server during peak hours.
+              usage and network bandwidth on the Azure server during peak hours.
             </li>
           </ul>
         </section>
@@ -303,8 +304,8 @@
             </li>
             <li>
               Developed a touch-based video editing frontend for mobile devices
-              in React Native with native GPU support to double editing
-              performance and increase video resolution to native.
+              in React Native with native GPU support to hardware accelerate
+              editing tasks and increase video resolution to native.
             </li>
           </ul>
         </section>
@@ -327,8 +328,8 @@
 
             <li>
               <span class="project-name">MAO-PWA:</span> a progressive web app
-              using Polymer3, Redux, and a Firebase backend to manage tutoring
-              and signups for my high school's math team (<a
+              using Polymer3 (now lit.dev), Redux, and a Firebase backend to
+              manage tutoring and signups for my high school's math team (<a
                 target="_blank"
                 href="https://www.git.mfoi.dev/mao-pwa.git/tree/"
                 >code</a
@@ -353,8 +354,8 @@
 
             <li>
               <span class="project-name">Simple AB Template:</span>
-              A local AB test stencil in vanilla JS using local browser storage
-              (<a
+              A local AB test stencil using vanilla JS and local browser storage
+              to track metrics (<a
                 target="_blank"
                 href="https://www.git.mfoi.dev/ab-testing-stencil.git/tree/?h=main"
                 >code</a
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